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Hi

What is wrong with the world today..
Missing out on your beauty your way..
Silk Black hair with special eye’s
When I look deep, my soul gets hypnotized ..
Look like you have never been touched ..
Touched right.. By the power called love..

Needing a person with a god heart and soul..
A Man that understands on how your chemistry flows..

You sure are a pretty being..
If I new where you was, I would send you a rose .
With another Love Poem, wrapped in
Pink..

Author notes

I will write another if that was not good enough..
or if that was not what you was looking for...
Your friend in Poetry....
JackReed3...

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  • Pretty Britty
    June 11, 2008

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    Aww this write was so sweet.
    There are a few grammar errors
    but it fits the love poem criteria very well.
    Well done!


  • KayJay
    June 11, 2008
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    Awwww. Sweetly said and I'm sure it will be appreciated.
    Ken