Fall me in love,
Take tight hold upon my heart.
You’d never admit it yet I know all too well
I already have yours.
Fall me in love,
Far away, we’ll go
Society cannot judge us there,
Our love shall bloom forevermore.
In love am I,
The thought, so innocent, pushes me to blush.
Such eagerness and waiting
On you, I just cannot give up.
In love are you,
Don’t deny you think of me
Or tell me that you don’t love me,
For I know; in love are you.
So in love are we
In love we shall remain.
I’ll never stop hoping, and my mind will never doubt,
Fall me in love, you have my heart forever.
Author notes
Oh hush,
I'm allowed to be lovey whenever I wish!
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A contest entry
- Make me want to fall in love by Spiritual Soul.
1200 points, ended June 11, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this, it has a certain rythm to it that I like, this sounds like a love song. Beautiful job. Thanks for entering!
Blessings,
~Michaela~ -
Of course you can and this quite to poem to show your "loveyness". Your getting much better as far as putting your emotion into the poem so that its clearly felt by the reader. Keep up the good work.
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