California is beautiful, I passed by a church that was closed for a wedding
Reminded me of that time in Santa Fe and the fun that we had
It’s a world I wish I could share with you, the ocean breeze, the scenery
Maybe one day, we can live together in a beach front house
The waves crashing on our front porch, toes in the sand, staring at the stars
We can make love at the water’s edge deep into the night, breathing in the fresh air
Maybe one day, when things are right, we’ll be together again
I love you.
Author notes
This is my Postcard Love Letter.
- WOMEN Support Group group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Loving Sentiments On A Postcard. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 14, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be Truthful.
Comments
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Wow Cris this is a great thought...
Sounds fantastic...being by the beach really makes me imagine this..
~smiles~
Simon
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what a heartfelt write my friend..
I hope you shared this with that special person..
and as your friend I hope one day you get your beach house..
Loving you beautiful,
Cat
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Wonderful sentiments you share in these few lines - written on a postcard this certainly fits into the contest theme.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Weird, I thought I commented..guess I didn't.
Sorry, but point is...this is really cute
and really sweet.whoever you wrote it for
must feel very special because this is really
tender. well done. good luck in the contest.
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Aw this is really cute.
"The waves crashing on our front porch, toes in the sand, staring at the stars
We can make love at the water’s edge deep into the night, breathing in the fresh air"
-- I love that. The imagery is amazing.
I hope you win
and you send this postcard to your lover. :]
♥
~Princess of Shadows~ -
touching
This could have been written by me, but you probably did a better job. I mean the sentiments not the poetic touch. I hope the best for you. Wonderful write.
. Rewarded 4
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