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Postcard Love Letter




California is beautiful, I passed by a church that was closed for a wedding
Reminded me of that time in Santa Fe and the fun that we had
It’s a world I wish I could share with you, the ocean breeze, the scenery
Maybe one day, we can live together in a beach front house
The waves crashing on our front porch, toes in the sand, staring at the stars
We can make love at the water’s edge deep into the night, breathing in the fresh air
Maybe one day, when things are right, we’ll be together again
I love you.





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  • Rmh4933
    November 2, 2008

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    Mesmerizing

    This is very well written, you draw the reader in so that they are on this journey with you, enjoying the pleasantness. Well done


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    Wow Cris this is a great thought...

    Sounds fantastic...being by the beach really makes me imagine this..

    ~smiles~


    Simon


  • Catressa gold member
    June 20, 2008

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    what a heartfelt write my friend..

    I hope you shared this with that special person..
    and as your friend I hope one day you get your beach house..



    Loving you beautiful,

    Cat


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Wonderful sentiments you share in these few lines - written on a postcard this certainly fits into the contest theme.


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 14, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • warrior-eagle
    June 11, 2008

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    Weird, I thought I commented..guess I didn't.
    Sorry, but point is...this is really cute
    and really sweet.whoever you wrote it for
    must feel very special because this is really
    tender. well done. good luck in the contest.

  • She Stole My Voice
    June 11, 2008
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    Aw this is really cute.
    "The waves crashing on our front porch, toes in the sand, staring at the stars
    We can make love at the water’s edge deep into the night, breathing in the fresh air"
    -- I love that. The imagery is amazing.
    I hope you win
    and you send this postcard to your lover. :]
    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • ShaShay
    June 11, 2008

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    touching

    This could have been written by me, but you probably did a better job. I mean the sentiments not the poetic touch. I hope the best for you. Wonderful write.

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