teardrops spring from my eyes
leaving stains down my face
falling onto my jacket
dissapearing without a trace
invisible, just like i feel
when you look through me
like im not there
theres nothing ot see
invisible, yea, thats me
just like a ghost
dreading the pain i keep
and the love i miss the most
ive lost everything
no one wants me around
life has sealed my fate
and i'll go without a sound
no one would care
cause no one would know
no one would be filled
with heartche and woe
ivisible, like my heart
people dont see how they tear it
driving me to madness
until i cant bear it
ivisible, thats my name
lost in this enormous world
invisible, my feelings and life
invisible is this girl...
A contest entry
- Something Different by SomethingPoetic.
375 points, ended June 27, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
go ahead tell me im wrong. it doesnt change a thing
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I have deffinatly felt like that before but just rember no matter how bad things seem people do care about you good write and good luck in the contest
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just like a song love, however you have a small misspealling one of your to's is written as ot
very very well written i liked it alot
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You've got a gift, poet...this is stunning. I love the repetition and youve expressed this feeling so well. I wont say I know how you feel since thats irritating! But i will say i know how i feel when i feel like this and it sucks big time! Wouldn't wish it on anyone!
Amazing piece here!!! You rock!
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Just so you know...
You have always shined in my eyes baby girl, maybe it is me who is invisible to you, because I am standing here with my arms wide open to hold you close, with tears in my eyes becuase you don't look at me like you see me anymore. Maybe I am invisible to you, because I try so hard to let you live and dream in bold colors, That I have in fact, your mother, faded into a pastel!
Love, mOm
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Your beauty and grace are so radiant I can see you all the way from across the pond in England hunni. Stay strong for me babes, take what strength I have, you can have it all aslong as you stay with us and share yourself with us. There would be a whole load of people that would hurt if you left.
love you my Vampire Bride
Your Darkened Angel
Del
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