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Forever

Forever gone
Now I stand here empty
And I am falling
Forever falling
Acheing inside
Forever falling
I see no light
This is goodbye


.......I am
            Forever gone

just tell me what your honestly think

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  • XXVampire-GirlXX
    June 11, 2008

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    i really like it

    It is so short but yet so good!!! How do you do it! You have talent!! Keep it up and yes honestly i like your writing!!

    ~*Jamie~*~