even though I have never met you,
I feel like Ive known you my whole life,
though I've never seen your face,
that's the one I awake to
I've heard your voice but once
still it fills my mind
this is messed up
I'll confess
but I love you
and if we ever meet in life
I'll already know it's you
love is a screwy coaster ride
that's why it's so much fun
Author notes
I love you Maddie
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Romantic
That is very romantic. I love it. That special girl very lucky
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wow
This was wonderful Josh keep up the good work.
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Thats really cute
Plain and cliche
but cute
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AWE! this is fantastic and sweet. you did a great job with this
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When I was your age I would have never been able to write something like this. It sounds as though you have wisdom far beyond your age. I'm the guy right behind you in line for the ride.
Regards,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.
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fabulous
this is fabulous I feel all tingly inside.teehee
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speechless
Josh I love this so much! I am so speechless.
I love you too. Is writing a song for cd.
I love you and will call u tonight.
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