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Ideal Human

Embodiment of patience,

Framed new

Definition to tolerance,

Lifestyle

The simplest one.

Kindness undefined.

Forgiving

The highest trouble shooters as well.

Though unschooled,

Possessed unmatched knowledge.

Trusted by

The biggest of enemies.

Treasure of love.

Example of

Honesty and truthfulness.

Just, as no one else.

Declared infallible

By Allah.

He is my prophet,

Prophet Mohammed

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  • couldbeworse
    March 4
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    He is my prophet,

    Prophet Mohammed

    alhamduliah! He is our prophet ! lovely.


  • tawk gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    A sense of peace overwhelmed me as I was reading your amazing write. Wow just beauitiful and such vivid imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading. Theresa


  • abuyi
    June 21, 2008

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    Salam Aliya, this is very beautiful and stright from the heart.. i find writing on islam very difficult.

    i could see the love and embracement towards our Nabi (PBUH)very clearly.
    i feel you can enhance this write to another extend(well as to see this your first comeback towards poetry and its a blast) so try to work on it again.

    thanks for sharing it with me


  • crimsondew
    June 11, 2008

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    Just beautiful dear Aliya..love this ..reminds me of the 'salaam' I wrote for our Prophet...A wonderful beginning to your rebirth of poetry....


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 11, 2008
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    A ROADMAP TO PERFECTION

    SOMETHING TO REACH FOR

    THIS IS LOVELY

    VERY INSPIRATIONAL

    GOD BLESS...


    • Aliya Abbas
      June 11, 2008
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      thanx a lot for the encouragement dear. this is my first work since years. used to write poems long back. now feel like the hobby has taken a rebirth.
      bye.

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