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Light of Survival

Sunlight
Lies surround my forbidden state
As if the turmoils could not be endured
Survival.

A contest entry

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  • Spiritual Nature
    June 19, 2008
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    VERY INTERESTING!

    I can hardly believe you are just 16! You are already blessed with amazing talent. I can't wait to see where your talent will lead you.

    BLESSINGS,
    Doris


  • Elfin
    June 11, 2008
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    Well done and good luck in the contest


  • Cannonsfire
    June 11, 2008
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