I cry myself to sleep each night
My eyes wont close as I am wondering why
They say that love takes away your sight
Yet I realize this is why I cry
As tears run down my icy cold cheeks
I ask God to answer my prayers
For each time I cry I become weak
As I lost your love, a love so rare
Love I have given, but devastation's what I take
Haunted by nightmares, scarred by these fears
Oh! how I cry for heavens sake
To again have thus love so near
I hope that when this nightmare's over there can be a new beginning
A magical journey with you on a life that's worth living
Author notes
another one wrote for my ex, i really miss having her in my life...
A contest entry
- I'm not good at much, but I'm great at listening. by Sin Aesthetic.
600 points, ended June 21, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love and Emotional by Razor-Blade Romance.
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to a special friend
Comments
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A different poem.
One that hits me in a almost fairytale sense.
Well Done.
I like the emotion and feel for this love you have described. -
I am sorry to say that your poem did not survive the judging of Level Four: Presentation/Grammar
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If you are going to enter my contest I would appreciate it if you would follow the rules. You are lacking in your Author's Notes:
~Username
~Any further explanation as to why you choose that subject (not required, but it helps)
~Tell if it is supposed to rhyme or not
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