Imagine a place,
Where beauty is the queen,
And for peace to be her servant,
A world we would escape to.
A place without the daily drama's of life,
No tears and losses,
No deaths and fighting.
A world without sleepless nights,
Stressfree and no pollution,
No disasters like earthquakes and wars,
No dark or evil thoughts able to fill ones mind.
A place that originated from happiness,
With all the goodies from nature,
As if the world we find at the other end of the rainbow,
Is heaven itself.
Sugary sweet scented flowers,
Trees made out of chocolate and mint leaves,
The wind bringing a tempting smell of lemonade from the waterfalls.
A world that goes far beyond imagination,
Exactly what we want it to be,
One, that seems to be too perfect to be true,
And it is, isn't it?
A contest entry
- End of the Rainbow by JustSimplyLissa.
600 points, ended June 30, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful piece, but isnt that one of the coffee houses in amsterdam?, really liked this, just takes you from reality for a tiny while, but at least i know where to come now.
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LMAO! wow a coffee house in Amsterdam XDD I don't know. I live in Amsterdam and haven't been in an awesome one like that before.
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Wow... That was... Amazing... Well thought out. I think we all have had thoughts about a place like that. Great write. Keep it up meh love... ^-^
~Love, Ookami~
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Oh so true, too perfect to be true. Wonderfully descriptive and imaginative! Vivid pictures come to mind of such a world, a complete utopia. Woefully it isn't in our human nature to have such a place. Well done!
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