You're as a rose, speaking to the ocean,
and what strength you bestow with pink petals
Blushing in hues of cherry wines' devotion,
awaiting the crashing waves to settle.
A portrait of words of love never fails,
to capture the beauty of pools bright blue
Sherbet skies, as breezes push behind sails,
the rose to my soul falls in love with you.
You remain the anchor in each whirlwind,
each time dark waters try and flood my dream
I say a soft prayer down deep within,
and the beacon of the sea reigns supreme.
So let us not be troubled by sorrows,
and seek the radiance of tomorrows.
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A contest entry
- A Somewhat Random Contest For A Few Of My Favorite Men {{Invite Only}} by PerfectImperfection.
750 points, ended June 13, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such love tenderness and beautiful imagery as you write this precious romantic verse...Words that inspired my soul" you are as rose speaking to the ocean
Sherbet skies as breezes push behind sails, the rose to my soul falls in love with you"So much more in there to love ....a beauty of a write!
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superbly incredible as the words of love are inspired by the prompt. the passion in your soul speaks loudly from your heart and wondrous soul. you have always been a strength that anchors fighting dismay. your love shines in your words. much love always xxxx many blessings xxxx
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wonderfully penned love straight from the heart, pup!
i love the sherbert skies part. made me picture the ocean reflecting the skies sunset as these two lovers engage in one another's stare of passion!
yess!!
♥rianna
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Uh huhm i dont see my name listed on this one. J/k
This was absolutely breathtaking. A beautiful piece which i would of wanted to be penned to me by someone who loves like you.
Im in tears.
This is awesome.
I love you
Passionspromise
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very rewarding to read of love and dedication to the one true love, good luck in her contest..Lin
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wow what lovely imagery. I love it! Your love flows through your pen. keep up the good work. best of luck in the contest.
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I absolutely love this, I think it may be one of your best yet. I love the last two lines, I think they will stick with me for some time Best of luck in the contest.
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What a gorgeous write bro!
I love all of the emotion and imagery
in here. Great metaphors as well.
Good luck to you in this contest and
it's great to read your work again!
Take care and keep it up!
Jeremy0826
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