i walk alone in a long road of love,
a road of romance and sweetness around.
then along this long road i met someone,
someone who is so precious and only one.
my road began to brighten up,
showed me how life is so wonderful.
i met someone who gives me love,
till now i can feel how warm this love.
flowers, chocolate and gifts,
are not enough to give you my dear.
you deserve more than that i can give,
someone like you makes me swinging.
swinging in the air of happiness,
while smelling the sweetness of your love.
fortunate i am to be loved by you,
that's why i am saying this to you.
you are more than that i can ever imagine,
a love that i can never see to anyone.
for the love we have is truly special,
blessed we are my dearest someone.
call my name my sweetest love,
anything i can do for you my lovely angel.
you mean so much in this world,
that words are not enough to define.
if we are to count all the numbers
and the numbers are from one to infinity.
if only my love for you can be counted by numbers,
then think a word more than infinity.
if our English Alphabet is from A to Z,
and i will spell my feelings for you,
get letter L and kiss it with O,
hug it with V and marry me with E.
yes love only love so pure so clear,
i offer to you my beloved angelic one.
nobody can give definition even Webster,
for our sweet love can only be defined by the two of us.
Author notes
i love you
A contest entry
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A very sweet and sincere love poem. I like the plain spoken quality of telling it like it is from the heart. Thanks for your entry.
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This is so very clever! I enjoyed every word of it so much! You have a great touch with romantic words...
Very proud I am!
Love~
Mom
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good work
wish you best of luck for the contest -
well written
This piece was well written and flowed very nicely. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for entering and I'll definately keep this piece in mind. It's exactly what I was looking for. -
I can feel the love in this piece
Bravo =)
Favorite Part:
if our English Alphabet is from A to Z,
and i will spell my feelings for you,
get letter L and kiss it with O,
hug it with V and marry me with E.
yes love only love so pure so clear,
i offer to you my beloved angelic one.
nobody can give definition even Webster,
for our sweet love can only be defined by the two of us.
I found this amusing. So did my friend =) It is very good.
Thanks for this entry
Good Luck
♥[Katee]♥
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