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intoxicating

soft night, long night,
finally settling down as the stars twinkled a parade for us
yet storms in the distance
heat lightning as he told me
i've never been a fan of storms,

even if i say i am...

when the rain comes and the stars are gone
i pull my lover closer and whisper my love
his soft hands slowly gliding down me is pure comfort

how he knows every comforting touch
still
suprises me

when his lips find my back and my neck
im in such a bliss...
the night grows longer than expected

but neither of us complain

the storm has passed us by yet were still entwined
the scent of him as he holds me is intrancing
and tears form from the love i feel from him
he knows my heart and what it wants

he is intoxicating

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well its been a while but i cant sleep...

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