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Emptiness

Missing image
My heart's bleeding,
broken and torn;
there'll be no one here
come the early morn.

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  • Nature Song silver member
    June 13, 2008

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    Come the early morn...nothing will be here! Congrad's on the HM. Short and sweet poems are sometimes the best. This one truley expresses Emptiness! ~Sie


  • Lavender Butterfly
    June 11, 2008
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    how beautifully sad... x


  • crimsondew
    June 11, 2008
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    A moment well captured here...like it..All the best!