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The Ring

waving past my face as if to taunt and tease
the gleaming dark metal with which your heart agrees.

your hand lags by, as if in slow motion.
i imagine that side of you,
but haven't the slightest notion.

i feel the
pretty ring finger of my cold left hand
smooth skin around, but lacking a band..

and i picture its twin on a perfect ten
and then i close my eyes in sorrow again

[but i've never really been a fan of symbolism, anyway.
we can live without it.]











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