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Rainbow Land

Slide down the rainbow to a magical land,
cotton candy clouds, and chocolate sand.

Trees made of licorice, with minty leaves,
colorful soda flows in rivers and seas.

Ice cream mountains with cherry top,
field of mini lollipops...

Gingerbread houses on peppermint lanes,
with picket fences of candy-canes.

A sweet sugary land at rainbow's end,
full of fun, fantasy and pretend.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • NeonRose
    June 15, 2008

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    This is so cute..would be a great addition to a children's book of poetry! Good luck in the contest!


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    The imagery in this is amazing, wonderful description of CandyLand!!! Love it! It is so sinfully sweet! This place would cure any sweet tooth!


  • aboomer silver member
    June 11, 2008

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    LOVE the images in this! Sounds like so much fun - and how wonderful for a kid! or adults addicted to sweets...lol...
    GREAT wording!
    best wishes in your contest.