Dearly Departed,
I can't see you now
but I know you're here
and I never question how
Dearly Beloved,
I cannot believe you're really gone
never to embrace me again
where is the warmth of dawn?
Dearly Lost,
I miss you so
but I know you still love me
even though it was so long ago
Dear Angel,
you're high in the sky
I can feel your warmth around me
as you whisper a heavenly goodbye
I know you're happy there
now I can live again and feel free
the world once more feels fair
and I know you're waiting for me.
Author notes
Hope you feel better Misty Melody; the lost are never really lost until you make it so. Smile once more.
A contest entry
- [ Thats your name really?] For her by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspiring Lift Up by Confused CRow.
625 points, ended July 14, 2008, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - sad poems!!! ENTER NOW!!! by PrettyPrincess206.
323 points, ended July 7, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dear Departed Friend by Misty Melody.
850 points, ended September 13, 2008, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You are only 13? Something profound coming from someone so young is hard to believe. It shows you have lived a lot in your short life.
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Wow.
this is great!
Makes me feel the way I did when my
mother died. everything you said is
so perfect.!
thank you for entering my contest.
best of luck to you.
keep writing!
+!~Confused CRow~!+
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This is good i like it thanxx for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
xxx--<3--
Shelly
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