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Second Wind

 

 

 

Let's have a drink to changes in pace
Do a quick 2 step cross the floor
Ever to set eyes on this place
Ever again
Never again

My dust shan't rest
on the shanty shack floor
Kick'n it up
Kick'n up the dust
Going to stick it to the man
Send em' cryin' out the door

Success with purposeful wondering
Sauntering unto graceful rhythm
Dancing down the yellow grid line
Serendipity shall be mine

 

Conquest of the ole' soft soul

Grasping and grapple-ling, just to belong

Trying to right the wrong

Building up that chance

to finish up strong.

 

 

 

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  • daffodilblossom
    December 4, 2008
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    the ending

    i luv the last two lines of this and it is excellent great job


  • BluesMan gold member
    July 15, 2008
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    It's never too late to dive back into life Thank you for entering my contest


  • Oktobere Sahnge
    June 15, 2008

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    I like this. At first I thought of running a marathon with the title, but I see that dance is just as well.


  • hoodoolover silver member
    June 11, 2008
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    Love this, it has a clear voice and a spirited one at that, very enjoyable!