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Forever Bonded.

Together as one,
forever entwined.
All with a kiss,
and this supernatural bliss.

Two separate bloods,
made as one being.
Bound by gold,
in a never ending circle.

Forever bonded,
by holy words...
forever bonded,
hand in hand, never to break.

A contest entry

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  • Lights Sorrow
    June 11
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    Thank you. I'm happy you liked it. This was definitely something I found fun to write on.

  • Thoughts-of-Soloman gold member
    June 11

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    I like it much,

    pointing to beauty in a succinct way and the form is most pleasing to the eye.

    Well done and all the best.

    Sol


  • PoetrysAngel2041
    June 11

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    exactly what I'm looking for

    This piece was beautiful and nicely written. It was filled with the emotion I wanted and that the couple feels for each other. Thank you for writing this.