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[ Dance of darkness in eternal night ]

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Dance of darkness in eternal night

she holds him in her grasp dancing

the night away.

 

The seductress holds him bound in

her eyes as she holds him close to

her body.

 

Every night in his dreams she appears

to dance with him in the eternal dance

of death.

 

Soon he will be hers in this night dance

of life or death, he grows paler each and

every night of his life soon to sleep.

 

Two puncture marks upon his neck is what

is left of these nightly trysts beauty all its

own.

 

When she makes her final visit the heart

stops it beat and now he becomes one

with her.

 

A creature of the night now for all of the

eternal dances in the dance of deaths door

this will be her husband in the dance.

 

He dances with her in this dance of death

forever more now he is her husband in

the world of the vampyre.

 

God has nothing to do with them here for

they no longer have a soul that is bound

in an eternal hell.

 

Lovers one, Lovers all, this is what they become

before the worlds fall, when these creatures

of the night burn in the heavenly light. 

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Manson

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  • OCDPolarBear
    June 20, 2008

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    this really paints a great picture...i love it. gets my imagination really going. thanks for sharing. thanks for the comment on my poem too i really appreciate it a lot thanks a lot.


  • SecondChances
    June 12, 2008

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    very cool

    and very ethereal at the same time. It really gave the feel of the darkest night with the sense of being trapped, but acceptance.


  • KateMadness
    June 10, 2008

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    :D

    I absolutely love it.
    This was exactly what I was hoping for, and I got it. Luckily one person knows what's on my mind.
    Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 10, 2008

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    ooh hun this is a really good poem
    i love it lots, i love the imagery in this,
    you should place in the contest babe,
    i think you will, all my love,
    kitty xx