Petals brush against my skin
In shades of silver and blue
Dew drops die upon my hand
A morning iris petal falls
To the verdant earth below
A blending of green and azure
A compliment to beauty
In its most primal form
A contest entry
- Give me Beauty.... semi-quickie... by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This has the appeal of an early morning garden. Lovely indeed. Congratulations on your HM.
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Some beautiful descriptions! A lovely take on the prompt, good luck in the contest.
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Nature and all it's primal forms are indeed so beautiful.. far more than anything we could create or design!! Lovely write!
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We seem to find great beauty in the things we cannot create... Luckily, Nature saves us once again. Beautiful image, lovely words... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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