It's driving me insane
Insanity I can't bear it, watch me
you acting like you don't know
no,no don't do that babe
Ever since I lost you
I could never pull through
You got whatcha wanted
And it's killing me inside
But I'm gonna bring you back, to the right track
And it drives me crazy, inside, you lied
You going round with that stupid girl, round the world I see
But not for long, it's not gonna take too long
You know what i wanna say- Yeah right
I'm gonna take her life away
I'm gonna roll the dice today-got it?
I'm gonna take her life away
It's driving me insane
Insanity I can't bear it, watch me
I tried too hard to do things on my own
But I ended up thinking about you alone
And I'm writing this song
To commemorate my patience for this day to come
I'll make sure you find easy to see
She's dying with me or before me
But not certainly after me.
A contest entry
- I'll Show You A Sweet Dream by KateMadness.
475 points, ended June 12, 2008, 12 entries
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I really liked the ending..I mean it was all good, but the ending had punch!..I liked this alot..I could tell instantly it was a song..very flow-y ..and great ..hope to read more..
-Lu
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Heh
I like it. Let's take a chance and kill her...alright? :/
Ignore that...that's the psycho inside me talking.
You forgot Manson in the notes, but ah well. :]
Cause I liked it, and that's all that mattered to me.
Great job!
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