Days of our lives so short,
So many problems we have to sort,
Tears fall from our face,
Trying to move up in life,
But we stay in the same place,
Trying our best to make ends meet,
Working 9 hours a day on our feet,
Walking 5 miles in the cold,
Until now the working man`s story,
Went untold,
So hang in there that's what I say,
Because every man will have his day,
So hang in there hold on tight,
For you will be in my prayers tonight,
So here is one for the person who needed there job there car broke down so they ran,
Here is one for the working man.
Author notes
I hope this helps your block if I win or not =)
A contest entry
- Looking for true inspiration by unanswered.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really liked it. It was simple and yet very well written. Your rhyme was flawless. I really enjoyed it. I love the premise. Its totally diffrent from the other entries. thank you for taking the time to enter, It was truely inspiring.
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I liked this poem!It had some good rhymes!My favorite line was "For you will be in my prayers tonight" Nice poem and I hope it wins the gold trophie (I know trophie is spelled 'trophy' but I like spelling it with a i and a e!)Anyway good luck!
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