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This Girl...

from a far
I see a faint

yet a glimmer of
her smile

while lost in the
print of such

ebony eyes and
drawn to her enchanting

strut,my feelings
tend to fall shy

of her ears
and land on

the heaven she calls
her lips

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everyone has a "that girl"

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  • cre8tiv-writer
    November 4, 2008
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    This is so amazing!!!!! I love the flow..poetically enchanting!


  • motel silver member
    June 11, 2008
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    the imagery expresses well the sense of groundlessness when near "that girl". thanks.