Bathing in the sun's bounty
our bodies begin to sing
with love's language
Kisses caress carefree and
desire's rhythm renders
us breathless
Bound to ardor's aria,
in harmony our melody melds
as chords of
one sensual symphony
Author notes
Prompt: "Sun kissed melodies", 40 words or less
In a list
A contest entry
- Kinda Quickie!!! Reserve a spot!! by Weltt.
550 points, ended June 11, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh, such extreme passion and such a feverish delivery. You just do so much with a love poem.
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Fantastic! You have written this very well to the prompt! I love the picture! There is so much passion. Congrats on the silver!
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Nicely done, Jacks. Sensual, smooth, and a joy to read. Physical heat and emotional connection in one piece. Another nice gem and congrats on the silver!
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oh very nice jacs!
love it!
and trophy is MOST deserved
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congrats on the silver.....very nice piece...andy
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Excellent
Wonderful word choice for the contest. Congratulations on the silver -
Congrats on the silver!
This is intense, so full of passion. A gorgeous poem, beautifully penned. You certainly gave the pic some heat Congrats on a much deserved silver
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Oh wow sis this was so deeply, passionately and beautifully sensual. Loved the feelings of warmth you have penned with your words. Amazing take on the prompt & congrats on the silver
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HOLY COW! My nipples got hard reading this lol! Wonderful imagery and metaphore. I LOVE IT!
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Glad it could have that effect! 
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Politica, politics, what is it with you and politics? I'd vote for you.
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Excellent
Wonderfully descriptive choice of 40 words. So very well done. Congrats on the silver.
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WOW - very nicely done!! Great wording!!!
Congrats on the well-deserved Silver!
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A beautifully romantic poem awwww
Congrats on the silver!!
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Outstanding!
This one has the perfect wording to melt any heart! Such romance and emotion. The imagery draws your reader into the moment of the mood. Great write! Don
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Love the pic. Wonderful write, congratulations on the silver!
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Nice sensual write...congrats on your silver...
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ohhhhhhhhhh f**k dis is so hot
luv it babes the pic is ace as is dis poem
yup that song roll on summer and spain hehe
abe
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'Bound to ardor's aria'What a magnificient line,as is the rest of this. Pure beauty and sensuality.
Congrats on the well deserved silver hun! Keep it up!
gaylene
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A nice, hot, and steamy write to read right before going to bed. Very well done on your silver shine.
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Wonderfully sensual write as always from you!! love the pic too
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RAWR! yes a sensual wrie indeed. Soft and loving basking in thhe kiises of the sun. I love to see my girl's hair kissed by the sun it is a beautiful sight. You did the prompt justice with your sensual alteritions and images well done and good luck in the contest
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awwww...lovely sensual write...
Bound to ardor's aria,
in harmony our melody melds
as chords of
one sensual symphony
Beautiful lines!
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All the best dear!
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