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A Humid Love

Your humid love
leaves me weak

but your words drip
like the morning dew

cool and wet
around my lips

your touch fills me
with a memorable melody

captured in the song
of a thrush









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It will be 40 words or less restriction

Prompt Here:"Sun kissed melodies"

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Comments


  • Talloaks silver member
    July 19
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    Great write and flow

  • Aww that's just beautiful!! Absolutely love this!


  • Weltt gold member
    June 11
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    Beautifully soft and sensual. well penned!


  • ardentMarch gold member
    June 10

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    oh, wow this is very beautiful & sensual...

    "but your words drip
    like the morning dew

    cool and wet
    around my lips"

    Love this