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Stop Me Before I Break

I can't see anything without you,
Finding you in everything I do.
My mind runs so wild now,
Even I can't comprehend it.
Take a step back. Focus now.

Illustrious polkadots flood my vision.
I feel so cold without you.
Down in the pit of my stomach
Lies my heart. At least, part of it.
It seems I'm missing an awful big chunk.

I wonder if you feel the same.
Nothing matters, always thinking of you.
Many are empathetic to my lonely cries.
Attempts at actions cheerful
Fall bitterly behind my line of sight.

Ranges of emotions take my brain.
Warm flashes of our short time,
To vengeful at those who defy us together.
Undeniably missing you.
I'm just a blubbering fool in love.

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Uhm. I miss my girlfriend.

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