eating dinner with loved ones
jupiter crushing next-door
aliens breaking in through windows
just imagine the horror
running and screaming
escaping through the front
the devilish creatures waiting
killing and killing the dearest ones
all surrounded and terrified
i wake up with a scream
now i finally realize
it was thankfully just a dream
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my worst nightmare
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short and to the point i like it
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Not Bad
I like the story this seems to tell but the rhyme and flow were slightly off, I think you did really well though and I have always been a fan of nightmares
good Luck
-Dustin-
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this was actually my most vivid and freaky nightmares! i had it when i was younger though
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What the night brings
Yes some times it is very lucky that we only dream. I like that this is a simple telling of a dream. It's not complicated and I like that. Thank you for entering. -
Night terrors...vivid description. I suffer these as well! Good job on sharing this.
Blessed Be~
Az
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