Another Day In Paradise

A tropical Island,
Full of life, and meaning.
Where true love is found
And a whole new life starts.

Walking along the beach,
Under the moonlight
With the water hitting your feet.
Making impints on the sandy bed

While seagulls soar over head

It’s just another day in Paradise,
At the end of every rainbow!

Author notes

Happy now Lissa? Oh, and by the way, G forced me to finish the poem and post it by throwing oysters at my head...it hurted.

A contest entry

End of the Rainbow by JustSimplyLissa. 600 points, ended June 30, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Eusebius
June 30, 2008

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bravo
Very neat and nifty and very well done... a most rooomantic piece of poetry... I liked this poem a ton! bravo... bravo...
Mister Monday
June 18, 2008
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=O Awsome!! Meh likey!! ^-^ Good write Kayla! Lovers you!

~Love, Ookami~
- Dancing Feather
  June 18, 2008
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  Thankies. I am glad you liked it and i luvers u too
JustSimplyLissa
June 12, 2008

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Beautifully composed write. I thoroughly enjoyed your take on the end of the rainbow

thanks for changing the background
- Dancing Feather
  June 13, 2008
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  Thanks for the comment lissa. By the way I do not appreciate having oysters thrown at me by Gemini....grr