My core radiates,
deeply between my legs,
down through the earth.
Its where the energy flows in,
and the energy flows out.
Alive,
I feel you inside me.
Shaking, trembling
You pulsate from within.
My eyes,
begging you to devour me.
begging you to rip me apart
from the inside out, only
so you can hold me together.
My thighs,
Pulling and spreading,
Calling to you, contracting,
Glistening with the
sweetness of my soul.
My fingers,
grasping the sheets as if
they could save me from this want,
as if they could quench my desire.
My teeth,
tugging on my bottom lip,
lips pursed, trying to hold back the
moans, squeals and whimpers that will soon explode from me!
Please, baby....please...
In a list
A contest entry
- Sooooo Sensual.... by SummerlandRayne.
450 points, ended June 16, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great structure
but make the phrase: soon explode from me!
the last line.
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WOW!!
This is the most erotic thing I have ever read...and excuse me, but I think you wrote this for ME, not hscopazzi, whoever that is!
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WOW
bravo! I'm bookmarking this one. Very well done. I should really stop reading these things at work, its not helpful. But thank you for the distraction anyway. Wonderful job. Give us more, more!
-Niur Tarow
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Well then!!!
I had no idea you felt like this about me!!! LOL
This is very hot and erotic! I liked what someone else said about not being trashy!!
Bravo,
Harmony
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Like the contest asked Sooooo Sensual. I think you got it with this one.
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What a lusty bit of poetry. Reading glasses are fogged up. This is wonderfully frank and erotic without being "trashy." In fact, you express a subtle innocence and a gentle, reckless abondon. I love this.
Good luck in the contest.
Garrison
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My oh my! Heated desire and wanton lust! Nice in intensity...very "pleasurable read!" Thank you and very best of luck!!!
Az
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