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Terra

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I am the ageless abode of eternal hope,

a bottomless well for love's purest nectar,

and the endless gale in creation's breath.

 

My vestments stretch in leagues of layers

that I take eons to change

with time and nature as my tailors.

 

Garlands of mountain ranges adorn my wardrobe,

massive mantles of valleys are a patchwork quilt

of the vest worn in constant vigil,

seas and streams,

the sustenance perspiration of my quintessence,

which flows from my watch care

over every heart that I have given life.

 

When my mood shifts with the sway from the sun,

they come in months of temperamental urges,

icy impulses spreading their wintry freeze over my garments,

subtle teases of happiness flower forth in spring expressions,

air electrified when joy's energy burns in summer's hues

before autumn's exhales its calming caress.

 

Pain from the shameless violations of my body

produce the deepest aches to my being, 

besetting shockwave tremors that shudder my vast girth of flesh,

while the turmoil over churning currents in my airy shield

stirs with thunderous stormy tests.

 

How I keep the secrets of my children's labors,

their desire's for invention and conflagration buried in my pores,

until one generation joins another in forever's sleep,

sending the ghosts of their visionary vapors into the night

so they will touch minds of those still alive with inspiration's dreams.

 

But through it all,

what I cherish most of, all deep in the searing core of my marrow,

is the precious times of a soul's awakening

who listens to the words I send through a spiritual wind,

until their eyes can understand and embrace with faith

how my form and face bears the brand marks

of God's fingerprints.

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  • Amarige
    July 11, 2008
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    Your entry was stunning..Congrats dad!


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    July 8, 2008

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    I read:

    The Archetype form breathed into Life,
    a stage on which 'Love's Affair' can take place.

    Constituents changing in natures time and patient way on a grand scale.

    Geographical features containing and in relation to water ways.
    Water the quintessence of Life and on which all the living are dependent.

    Seasonal changes, nature breathing and flourishing.

    The now and ever larger effects Mankind is having on our planet.
    The limits being tested.

    Our legacy of knowledge from those who came before, since the beginning and now largely forgotten (but not all ) and still have their place in our inspirations.

    'The Spirit governs and controls the material everywhere'.
    The world as the objectification of spiritual meaning, its purpose as a proof, means and invitation for Mankind to come to know His own Truth.

    This is a fabulous entry, in many ways. It covers most essential aspects pertaining to the world we've been given and our lives as human beings. It deals with the physicality in form and also ties it to inherent interior meaning.

    I also love and respect the universality in this, I find no dogma or contentious issues.
    There isn't even, to my mind, a pointing to a particular formal religion and let's face it the Truth is not confined by such constraints.

    The use of the word 'God's' in the last line is still open, to anyone, if they take it as such.
    I myself often hesitate to use this word in some situations but at the end of the day it is a word which will be given whatever degree of meaning, the reader will choose to give.

    I am very impressed by this write of yours!
    Thank you for coming up with this for us.

    Sol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Wow.. brilliant write with stunning imagery and depth!

    That last stanza was just wonderful!


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 11, 2008
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    Thank you for a wonderful entry into this contest.

    All the best with the judging

    Sol

  • Amarige
    June 10, 2008

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    Wowww my dear friend, this is excellent..your imagery is amazing..


    How I keep the secrets of my children's labors,

    their desire's for invention and conflagration buried in my pores,

    until one generation joins another in forever's sleep,

    sending the ghosts of their visionary vapors into the night

    so they will touch minds of those still alive with inspiration's dreams.


    your words are fantastic, everything about this piece is just great..this should be a winner

    Ruby34




  • Stardust-luvr
    June 10, 2008

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    wow my dear friend the imagery and message was sensationally profound yet calming and filled with peaceful utterances. well done and many blessings always xxx best wishes in the contest xxx

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