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Sugary MoonLight

Crystal moon-light,
Casting down sugar-tasting iridescent diamonds…
Under these stars,
She can count the truth in his eyes.

Gusts of young laughing wind,
Collapsing into chills upon her body…
He whispers things into her ear,
That no one but her can hear.

Soft green painted grass,
Slipping in between her dew covered toes…
His hands bring lust at its very heaviest,
He knows exactly what he’s doing with her.

Flowers dripping with colors,
Melting into their every breath…
His sweet tasting lips caress her insecurities,
She now belongs to him.

There’s crickets singing over their sighs,
And they’re in infamous harmony…
Her hearts beating against his chest,
And with every thump he falls in love deeper.

Crystal moon-light,
Casting down sugar-tasting iridescent diamonds…
Her skin is so soft and creamy,
He can barely stand how beautiful she is.

Gusts of young laughing wind,
Collapsing into chills upon her body…
His embrace tightens in all the right places,
And she loses herself in his scent.

Flowers dripping with colors,
Melting into their every breath…
Her smile brings him so much ecstasy,
Reality is just a cloud in the sky.

There’s crickets singing over their sighs,
And they’re in infamous harmony…
True love feels bigger than their existence,
True love feels galaxy beyond perfection.

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1/26/08

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  • ChaingangAngel
    November 18, 2008

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    WOw

    I loved the imagery in this write its beautiful I feel like I could capture everything your feeling Thanks for entering this contest~!

  • raymondsgirl8708
    September 10, 2008

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    holy crap. this is a wonderful descriptive poem. thank you for your entry and I hope to read more from you


  • unavailable
    September 10, 2008

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    I love this! Yummmmy!


  • Endeavor gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Excellent


    Gusts of young laughing wind,
    Collapsing into chills upon her body…
    His embrace tightens in all the right places,
    And she loses herself in his scent.

    Beautiful words of expression
    Loved it all

    Pure Gold

    Rick


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    This is just beautiful...the imagery is outstanding...you really drew me in with your first stanza and kept me wanting more! loved the read
    Hope you do well in the contest


  • raedium
    June 11, 2008
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    ...wow. this is fucking amazing.


  • loving.a.soldier
    June 11, 2008

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    *sigh* I am so completely in love with this piece! You had me from the beginning all the way to the end! You didn't lose me not even once! This piece definitely has a great chance of seeing the gold The flow was perfect. The imagery was phenomenal!! My favorite imagery in this piece is "Casting down sugar-tasting iridescent diamonds" WOW! So amazing! I really really enjoyed this. Thank you so much for entering this piece into the contest! Good luck to you!!

    The One and Only...

    ~Lynn Jones

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