Soft dreams
enchant evening
and linger past sunrise
of a sweet willow beside me
whom spirit truly is familiar with.
As we frolic through forever
I pin moonbeams to hair
more gentle than
soft dreams.
A contest entry
- To dream these dreams by Lagrimas.
525 points, ended June 12, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is simply stunning! A very enchanted Rictameter to say the least. With a very soft sigh at the end of this piece.
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~shaking head~
DAMN!!!
<<< is gobsmacked ... AGAIN!
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Aww.. how divine and sweet bro!! This really is a beautiful soft dream of two spirits entwined!
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SIGH:::....... such loveliness!!! Makes a girl all mooney-eyed!!!! Very well done and best wishes
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I think that it is very nice
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Simple
I like this for its simplicty. I'd have liked to have seen a little more to this. It seems like it could be so much more filling some how, I guess it leaves me wanting more. Not in a bad way, but in the same way a good dream would. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you.
Well, rictameter is a strict form. That is all the syllables allowed.
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