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Perhaps


Perhaps, a cat's whiskers
tickling night paths,
stirring neurons as she passes.

Left to decide
she sits and cleans
the clutter of dreams,

her innocent static
changing the flow
of the night.






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  • coddledsoul
    July 5, 2008

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    I like your work pretty much! The flow of your pieces are decent and the messages intriguing.. keep up the good work!


  • cvillelisa
    June 11, 2008

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    I've recently had several hundred (okay not hundred but it can feel that way) kittens in my life..

    you've captured something about their own brand of magic here.

    Lisa


  • adios muchachos gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    Purr-haps

    I think cats are a lot braver than I am. To go out all alone hunting for prey or just adventure takes more
    whatchamacallits than I'm endowed with.
    Nice John