Confused by the dark
Lost in soulless eyes
lacking any life
I fall
....
....
....
into
bottomless
wells
of
orbless uncaring
pools,
dark eyes
that know
me not
yet I still kiss you!
again
and again,
hoping to see
someone there.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 to 40 words by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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WOW
this is very very good!!
thank you, and good luck
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