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“To My Beloved One and Only Daddy”


♠ You be an ear when everyone ignores me
You be a shoulder on which I can lean
You be a hankie when I weep
You be a bandage when I bleed from my deep
You listen to me
Even when the walls won’t do
You help me even the world turns against me
You lead me when there is no light
You come and sleep by me
On stormy angry nights
To stop my fear and fright
You come and hug me tight
Cover me with my blanket

♠ When I go sad
You comfort me and say it’s not so bad
When I am bad
You come and turn me glad
When my hopes go splat
My ambitions go flat
You come to say
To never quit combat
Where there is no hope left inside
You come and take over the wheel

♠ When I am lonely
You be my friend
When I am abandoned
You be my tramp
When I got no home
You be my shelter
When I got no heart to live inside
You be a heart
And pump me with life
When my eyes fade to close
You come to say
A flower blooms and grows
Not withers and dies
Not sits and cries
When dark clouds cover the sky
You come to say
That I must go on and try

♠ When all ears go deaf
When all eyes go blind
When all lips go hushed
When all close their eyes
When all friends overlook 
You be like a book
Catching me like a hook
Carrying me up on your shoulders
As much as I grow old
I still be your baby child

♠ You hoist me up
When the ground goes fluctuating
When dirt covers the land
When water floods my way
You be a bridge taking me in your hands
So my feet won’t get a drop of water
When I shiver from cold
You come and blow a warm breather
And warm my core
When there’s no way to go
You be the one opening the hidden doors
When there’s no one left to help
On this earth you come and tell me
To run towards your arms
And you will take me home
Together to have dinner
In toasts of wine
When I am alone you be my daddy
My daddy up in neither heavens that never deceives nor leaves
Me lost behind

Author notes

I LOVE YOU DADDDDDYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
i hope this entry is acceptible though its long :S but praising daddy is lifelong

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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    November 21
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    I liked your poem, for it gave me just a glimps into another world thank you for that.


  • individuality gold member
    April 22
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  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    nice

    This is a great tribute to our heavenly father. He is all this and more and worthy to always be our daddy. LOve you son always, Daddy


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    This is absolutely beautiful. I loved it.
    Made me wish I was your daddy lol. But i am definately happy being a mom over here

    Wonderful tribute to daddy

    Love ya
    Passionspromise


    • Poetry-and-rhyme
      June 10, 2008
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      thanks for your comment welll parents are the best gifts GOd has given us i love mommy and daddy loadss but i wouldn't have loved them this much if i haven't loved the LORD Father of all first


      • PassionsPromise gold member
        June 10, 2008
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        You are right my darling.
        Great is the King who showed us unconditional love. We were blessed first by Him.

        You my dear are sweet. And you have the two best parents any can have.

        Love
        Passions

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