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Fecundity

IT TWIRLS AN' CURLS, AN' CURLS
SPINNING INFINITY:
ORGASMIC SPIRALS
OF INSANITY;

LIKE SHIPWRECKED SAILORS
RAFTING A CRUEL SEA,
LIFE WITHOUT WOMEN
WAS NOT MEANT TO BE:

SPUTTERING COLORS,
FLITTING BARBS OF FIRE,
LICKING TONGUES OF
INSATIABLE DESIRE;

LOVE MAY BE DEEP,
UNTHINKINGLY SINCERE;
YET WITHOUT A WOMAN
STRENGTH TURNS TO FEAR...

THE VORTEX VOMITS,
MANY FLOWERS BLOOM:
ASCENDING FOREVER,
AVOIDING SURE DOOM...

A DISTANT SAIL IS SEEN
WHILE OCEAN WAVES TOSS,
WHATEVER HOPE KINDLES
COUNTED IS FOR LOSS;

DRIFTING FAR, FAR AWAY
FROM LAND'S SOLID SHORE,
REMEMBERING THE PAST
NOW CAN BE NO MORE;

 

CARTWHEELS AN' FLASHES

ASCEND LIKE WHIRLPOOLS

NEGATING WITH LOVE

THE SCORN OF PROUD FOOLS.

 

GOD'S GREATEST GIFT OF LIFE:
A WOMAN'S FECUNDITY,
EXISTENCE'S PROFUNDITY,
A CHILD WITHOUT STRIFE!

 

 

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 11, 2008

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    now that is a poem and you have taken that picture to a new height...niaish so much for sharing it with me and for entering


  • WisdomWarrior
    June 11, 2008

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    Wow!! Where did all that come from?!

    You know you made me crack open a Dictionary don't you?!

    American Heritage Dictionary - Cite This Source - Share This
    fe·cun·di·ty Audio Help (fĭ-kŭn'dĭ-tē Pronunciation Key
    n.

    1. The quality or power of producing abundantly; fruitfulness or fertility.
    2. Productive or creative power: fecundity of the mind.

    American Heritage Dictionary - Cite This Source - Share This
    pro·fun·di·ty Audio Help (prə-fŭn'dĭ-tē, prō-) Pronunciation Key
    n. pl. pro·fun·di·ties

    1. Great depth.
    2. Depth of intellect, feeling, or meaning.
    3. Something profound or abstruse.

    And after careful research and intense study. I have to admit, you are still over my head. I get the basic meaning. It is definitely a praise of women and man's need for them for both companionship and proliferation of the species but I feel like I am missing a whole lot of hidden meaning because of my lack of comprehension here.

    sigh... ok... I'll go back to school.

    John


    • Oraculus
      June 16, 2008
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      Very humble, John!

      Actually, your own poetry is both fecundating and profound: my reference here in the poem is a tribute to God's Elixir of Love, the Holy Spirit, our lover and mother, our comforter and essense of life itself, the very wisdom of God's omniscience!