Early throws of passion
Insatiable desire
First touch
First taste of new love
Infatuation
Eyes bare unspoken declarations
Heart warming emotions…
Held tight in my lovers embrace
I anticipate lusts journey
Discovering each other intimately
As friends
As lovers
New beginnings…
Hot breath on the back of my neck
Pelvis molded to mine
Legs tucked close behind me
His manhood between my thighs
Rubbing against me
Tantalizing me
Begging entry to moist delights
Reserved for my lover
My chosen one…
I open myself to his offerings
Two become one
Rhythmic pulse of lovemaking
Whispered words of tenderness
A sacred affair of the body and soul
Connected in heightened state of ecstasy
Unashamed desire
Feeding burning passion
Naked revelations…
Reserved for my lover
In a list
A contest entry
- Beautifully Sensual. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Even if you are the competition...really awesome.


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Very sensual and compelling my friend!


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WOW
Intense. If this is from experience - terrific. If this is from your imagination - there are alot of stupid guys missing out. Great write.

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That was great I liked it very much.There's a flow of emotion and words.It's highly passionate and sensual.I especially loved this part:
"Two become one
Rhythmic pulse of lovemaking
Whispered words of tenderness
A sacred affair of the body and soul
Connected in heightened state of ecstasy
Unashamed desire
Feeding burning passion
Naked revelations…
Reserved for my lover"
A beautiful ending for a beautiful poem.
Thumbs up and GOOD LUCK
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