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Can't you see me

Can't you see me sitting
right across from you
can't you hear me saying
i am here with you
cause i hear you saying
where has my friend gone

as i sit there thinking
what has just gone wrong
she just sits there gazing
right into my eyes
but she doesn't see me
and that puts me in surprise

the next thing that i notice
i was on her bed
and with a little lonliness
she had gone and said

i cant believe this happened
oh why of all times now
we were soon to be married
i give a little bow
to the one that took you away
from me
to day...oh why today
it was to be...

Can't you see me standing
right behind you in your room
can't you hear me saying
i haven't left you all to soon
because i hear you cryihng
my friend has left me alone

truly i am not flying
i haven't left you all alone
don't you see me here
looking in your mirror
with you standing there
being such a crier

that's when i notice
my body in a box
my arms folded lossless
and she stood there in the rocks
i can't believe this happend
and i walked up next to her
and this is when i started
to become more of a believer

you can't see me stay
holding you in my arms
you can't hear me say
you'll never leave my arms
cause i hear you say
I'll never leave my arms

that is when i felt her
holding onto my me
then i was a believer
finding it to be
I will never leave you
i will always be right here...








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  • God is my reality
    July 28, 2008

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    It's kinda scattered, but I get it. It's good, but it needs to flow smoother. It was a nice poem, and it had a good message. Good luck in the contest


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 17, 2008

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    Wow i like this but you didnt tell me your favorite animal this is very well written
    thanks for entering my contest
    i wish you the best of luck in it
    for you