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Hurt but not broken


First year of our life together
You confessed to taking it as a joke
Free to roam and conquer

Countless nights of you calling me your wife
at least when you thought the words would appease me

Worthless promises about tomorrow
broken wishes of things to come

      I will change
        Things will be different
              I promise

Enough to pacify me 'till
You inevitably reared your ugly head
Time and time again

"Ride it 'till the wheels fall off"
Your credo
The motto you live by
The engraving that shall grace your tombstone
The legacy you shall leave behind

Well you took me for a ride
Played me for a fool
Not caring 'cause you were fine

You loved me enough to keep me demur
Creeping off when you thought
All shout eye (- -) were closed


Reality is a Bitch as you soon found out
A down bitch I was but a
BITCH non the less

I beared the weight of three men
As well as yours and mine

Brought home the bacon fried it up
Feed the kids and kept you clothed with no worries

Submissive to a point
and that point was reached the moment
Your nickname should have been "excuses"

      It's to hard
        Everyone is against me
          It's to hot /cold to ride the bus

Quit your whining
And man up
I had to....
.....be man enough for both of us

No complaints came out
Of the mouth you loved so much
When I became
   
  Full time mom
      student
        lover
          maid
            handy man

and none shall come now
that you are truly free to
Roam and Conquer

HAVE FUN

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  • righteousme
    June 10, 2008

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    i loved this loved it loved... the part about "riding it till the wheels fall off"... i use that often but in this context it is sad and such a stupid thing to refer it to... thank you for your time and talent...