In his arms
Where I tremble
He was the one who hurt me
Yet here I am
In his arms in where i remain
Trembleing and shaking
Unsure if he will hurt me
Unsure if he will break me again
My heart remains in pieces
My heart remains scarred
Nothing will make me forget
Nothing will make me not remember what he did
Though our love is there
My fear remains as well
Remaining in the arms
The arms of the one who caused the pain
Please tell me what you think
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you can feel the heartbreak throughout this..if I can be so bold as to say..your ending is not as strong as the rest of the poem...not sure if you can just reword it to give the final impact or how to do it..just my humble opinion..the rest of the poem is awesome..an ending with a bigger impact would be more in line with this caliber of poem...excellent write..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..
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~sigh~ hun really you do need to forgive him if you ontinue to hol don to the past then you will destroy your relationship with him
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When will you forgive me. I have forgiven you.
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such a strong, emotional poem...how our love for others blinds us; how we are want to believe people are better than they are. we always go running back. great write =)
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wow cassie!!! This one is so awesome!!! Very vivid and very well written!!! Great job lil sis!!!
Hugs,
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this is soo great it's sad and i can feel the emotion behind this but not with that much power behind that i felt the fear .. i felt the pain .. i and see
just hang in there with that now you inspierdme to write and i wont to knwo something
i am going to make a web site with my favorate poetry and i was wondering if a can have the permission to use this poem on my website
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