A veil has been tossed
I am engulfed by the shadows.
All tears have been lost,
further I fall in Hells pillows.
Bursting with venoms dew
upon the day of of set misery
over your being it shall spew
releasing the unbearable hold on me.
A frosty white vision appears
and I am within its grip.
All others will disappear
as I remove the pink from your lip.
No voice will be heard
as I inhale the breath out of you.
My body trembles with every word
that sent me tumbling, from your view.
Exhausted I am with this fight,
through depths of my being I thrive
to accomplish another step towards light,
or be damned and be taken alive.
Ripping to shreds my wings
My halo and my gown;
Torturing me with assorted things
You throw me to the ground.
Such lying vindictive snakes
Upon these lands they crawl.
You allow such vicious mistakes
Granting them a winner’s ball.
So reach in and screw me
For I’m no longer pure.
Raw and fitting, hit it tightly,
Cause my blood is the cure.
Drain me dry evil leaches,
Strip the inner being free.
You’re nothing but meaningless Bitches,
Trying to make a prisoner out of me.
Within these chains I am held,
For he is silencing me.
So words to you have been withheld,
One day, I will speak freely.
Until then, “Screw You!”
Within Hell I will see you there.
For now I am through,
But in time you’ll get your share.
A contest entry
- Raw Emotion by loving.a.soldier.
600 points, ended June 27, 2008, 26 entries
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All others will disappear
as I remove the pink from your lip
Those lines are absolutely PERFECTION.
This was awesome. Very Nice Job**
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This is pure raw emotions, and I pray you are okay.
For my sister, you mean the world to all that you have
ever touched.
Please be strong. As I know you can be.
Joann
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A very powerful piece! I feel the anger and the pain in this. And to me, it's amazing. I hope you're actually okay though
I didn't find any mistakes in this piece. Which in my book...is a HUGE plus! Thank you for entering the contest! And good luck to you. And again...this piece is PHENOMENAL!
The One and Only...
~Lynn Jones
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A Potent Piece Indeed!
I hope you are OK sweet soul.
Know I love ya, and I'm thinking about ya.
Hang in there, and stay strong.
-Timothy
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Wow, very powerful and frightening honey. This is full of emotion and anger. An excellent write dear. Love you...Scott
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