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Foe over Friend

Can't you see behind that exterior?
Many people have told you she's lethal;
I know I’ve seen them tell you.
I was one of them that told you as well.

Do you realize what this little two-faced brat is talking about?
Of course you don't! You REFUSE TO SEE WHAT YOUR FRIENDS SEE.
One more time you once again disown your friends for a foe,
Like you said that you would NEVER do.

"My friends mean the world to me, and I would never forsake them."
Well that's what you said; before SHE came along as a so called friend.
I know you hear what she has done to your real friends,
Dated your brothers and fucked them over.

Countless acts that would be only spelling disaster for you too!
No one tries to stop you anymore and no one comes around to call anymore.
You wonder why and ponder the reasons???
Have you ever thought that it’s the company you now keep and not just you?

Go ahead take a foe that really isn't your friend.
The ones watching know that it will only be the end of you again.
When all the crap is over with you two and your alone once again,
All I have to say is "We told you so".

It should be Friend over foe,
But I guess you didn't get the letter in the mail...
You chose the foe over your family and friends,
Just don't expect me to be there in the end...

Author notes

(silent pain16 not so obviously that i forgot to put an notes in the section.)

as to what this poem is about... hmm to make months worth a crappy teenage high school novel like poem short... is a friend of mine was/is going through a rough time. also instead of turning to his usual group of friends, he turned to a girl that has been around if you know what i mean. this girl is a two-faced little bitch, she's cheated me out of shit AND she's cheated on several of her boyfriends (and dated most of my guy friends' friends/brothers).

his friends who are like his brothers have said that he needed to stay away from her, and including myself in this. but he knowingly goes to this girl for a "friendship" and possibly a "relationship".

this is my personal way of saying "you chose her, knowing she cheated MORE than once several times in a few months, been through more guys than most girls in a few months, go right on ahead. just be prepared to lose my trust and respect completely."

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  • Firequeen
    June 11, 2008
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    i think we have all had a friend do this at one point or time. unfortunatley they have to see it and the other person for them selves and find out who they really are for them seloves so your doing the right thing. he'll have to find out on his own what shes like.
    great honest write.
    Fire


  • silent pain17
    June 10, 2008
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    I really like this, but I'm kinda confused about what it is actually about?


    • RogueShadow
      June 10, 2008
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      what its actually about? i'll edit the comment section for ya okay?