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Acceptable Loss

Without September, I would be five years younger
without the loss of wisdom, so painfully learned
and so preciously valued.

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  • sora.
    September 13, 2008
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    i, too, enjoyed this.
    great work, & good luck.
    =]


  • Lyndon gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Whimsical sixty year-old!

    60/12=5years!
    You had a poetic joke at our expense!
    Thank you.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Life does have its lessons and if we grasp them, painful as they may be, we are indeed more enlightened. Nice work with brevity. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • February Moon gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    deeply profound and personified... x

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