Humanity is so unkind,
Everyone isn't what they seem.
Just know that all is well,
Ends in hell.
I have a policy,
Of revengence.
You get on my list,
You might as well end it.
Take a look around,
No one is bending down,
Helping someone off the ground,
When they fall.
There is a blacklist,
Of the dark and morbid.
It isn't easy,
To smooth talk your way out.
They walk the day,
Just as well as night,
You'll never know,
If it's your turn for fright.
Come on just one fight,
I'll even give you the first punch.
Don't be a sissy,
I'm already pissy.
Your torment,
Your hell,
Your pain,
I'll end it tonight.
Author notes
-♥- Blacklist- Exodus
.[™].I'm.Dakota.Bay.Bee.Don't.Forget.Me.[™].
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this is hard hitting, strong stuff, i enjoyed this
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wow. I love this. I hope sister gives you a good medal my love.
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Wow, this sort of caught me off Guard, its so raw...and gives me the image of you punching somebody in the face.
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THAT IS BLOODY
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I Love it.
It's hard core and definitly does the song justice. It's absolutley great, to die for!
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Damn true
Is there anger in this? Sure. But there's also a hell of a lot of observation and wisdom from someone who isn't that old (no offense meant). You speak the truth in this poem especially in lines like 'Humanity is so unkind,
Everyone isn't what they seem' and 'No one is bending down,
Helping someone off the ground,
When they fall.' It's sad that humanity has come to this, but it's true. If I can ask one thing though, what do you mean by the word 'revengence'? just curious. I wish you luck in the contest.
~Winterfall~
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Very angry. Nicey done. I once felt the same way, and sometimes still do, but mostly I let it go. I never forget.
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Observant and wise
Take a look around,
No one is bending down,
Helping someone off the ground,
When they fall.
It is refreshing to know that someone so young can see beyond what we are meant to see.
To know and accept the truth can perhaps help to one day change things.
xo
wolf
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The poem was good and I liked it... But it sounds like maybe you should be more forgiving. XD
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