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Bitter-sweet Lost

Without September, my summer romance
would never fade into my dreams.
A bitter sweet parting, only bitter in the end.

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  • sora.
    September 13, 2008

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    "a bitter sweet parting, only bitter in the end"
    this is very often the case...
    the title of his piece is also intriguing.
    great work, & good luck.
    =]


  • Lyndon gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    A summer romance, of course, does not have to be a sexual encounter at all. It can be the romance of hiking in the mountains and so on. I wonder which you had in mind?
    Whatever, a fine little poem.

    Lyndon of the Winklings.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Indeed by September it would no longer only be a summer romance. Nice work with brevity. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • February Moon gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 10, 2008
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    very emotion driven and expressive... x

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