The car of his dreams,
Would go down the road,
Blastin music at full force.
It would go up and down,
Cer plunk a plunk plunk.
It would also have cool lights,
First Green then Red,
Then Blue and then Orange.
It would make all the guys,
Scream then faint.
It would be great,
It would be the coolest,
Thing on the block.
It would be Red with cool,
Yellow flames and Blue racing stripe.
What a car it'd,
Be but, sadly thats my brothers,
Dream car not mine...
I hope he gets it,
When he turns 16!
Author notes
Is this the type of car your bro wants Confused?
Well if so I hope he gets it!The car I just wrote about might make your brother actually look cool!
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Comments
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LOL!I won't tell him about the cool thing!He wants a low rider!(I think he wants some sorta neon lights???IDK!)Anyway i liked it!
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To be a car thet woulld be neet, untill the they come smog me uunderneath. The hood that is. I may be older than you, I stiil have a dream car in mind. Good luck to whoever wants a dream car. Good job!1
Is the car the journey, or is the journey the car.
~Himura Kenshin
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