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Poetic Emoness...

A silent scream
Trapped in a bottle
Lost at sea

Author notes

I'm not going to explain this piece. Enjoy all little thoughts passing through your head.

A contest entry

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  • Lae Fyrestorme
    June 10, 2008

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    very clever...i read it like 5 times and sooo many ideas came to mind. words that make people think is what makes a brilliant poems. great write

    ~lae


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    You know I've sat here for ten minutes trying to work this poem out? I've come up with a dozen scenario's and they all could've fit. Ah!!! It's annoying me now!! Jks hehe

    I like it, hidden twisted meanings and intriguing to say the least!!

    I wish you luck in my contest and thank you for entering

    Claire xx