Rustling leaves
Fresh dirt after rain
Golden sunbeams streaming
Through the canopy
Snow melting on the ground
Squirrels running through the trees
Solitude surrounding, and
Serenity
Crisp air
Fallen log
Like candy for a six year old
Here i feel happy
Birds singing to each other
Echoing my thoughts
Joy and bliss beyond compare
In simplicity
A huge forest on a mountain
All activity
Absolutely wonderful
Awesome majesty
Rustling leaves
Snow melting on the ground
Birds singing to each other
All Serenity
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Comments
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It was beautiful! You seem to have started to repeat the opening line of each stanza in the last stanza, but you did not include "crisp air" or "a huge forest on a mountain". I really like the idea of summerizing the poem at the end, it is very simple and peaceful. Great job!
Jenn
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