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Emotionally GONE

Torn apart.. blown up heart..
Hair is falling out.. Silent screaming shouting..
Mentally untamed.. Bloodthirsty insane..
Emotionally gone.. Not knowing right from wrong..

Push to the limit.
There is no more minutes.
Mentality of, on going head games.
Brought me fourth.. Pain, Pain, then more Pain..

Push to the limits.
I have no more minutes.
My heart is twisted, in thorns of veins.
For someone else’s, gloated gain..

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Back stabbing relationships can be hard...
Thanks for the Contest..
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JackReed3

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  • loving.a.soldier
    June 10, 2008

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    WOW! The very first poem I read and I'm already blown away. I think I might need to take breaks between poems if they're all so emotionally wonderful as this one! Back stabbing relationships can definitely be hard. I'm glad you wrote about it. It's better to get it out than to keep it in. I felt the emotion in this piece and that's EXACTLY what I want. Great job and good luck!!!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    wow, this is a head spinner, but great flow, and emotions gone wild, lovely write and good luck in the contest
    take care
    stephanie